From fb622bf1dfafd0ad93590b6b5d675581c627ceb5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: nish3451 <257724087+nish3451@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 6 Aug 2026 11:26:15 +0530 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] Reframe site copy from repair job to condition report 'Leak audit' told a supercar dealer his operation was sloppy. Fable's diagnosis: swapping it for 'The Audit' and 'named findings' traded a tradesman's metaphor for a bureaucrat's, keeping the deficit frame while losing the imagery. The frame changes instead: not 'you are broken' but 'your site is beneath what you sell', which aims the critique at the website and flatters the product. Free deliverable is now The Website Appraisal; faults belong to the site, never the business. Register rule: condition report, not repair job. --- public/agent-desk.html | 20 ++++++++++---------- public/agents.html | 10 +++++----- public/audit.html | 18 +++++++++--------- public/brief-requested.html | 10 +++++----- public/index.html | 26 +++++++++++++------------- public/pricing.html | 18 +++++++++--------- public/specimen.html | 10 +++++----- 7 files changed, 56 insertions(+), 56 deletions(-) diff --git a/public/agent-desk.html b/public/agent-desk.html index fc3ba8d8..bbf53a9d 100644 --- a/public/agent-desk.html +++ b/public/agent-desk.html @@ -3,15 +3,15 @@ - TinyStudio Agent Desk + The Tiny Studio Agent Desk - + @@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ - + @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ { "@context": "https://schema.org", "@type": "Organization", - "name": "TinyStudio", + "name": "The Tiny Studio", "url": "https://tinystudio.io/", "logo": "https://tinystudio.io/apple-touch-icon.png", "description": "Self-serve AI agents for high-ticket pipeline setup: offer, funnel, creative, qualification, follow-up, CRM, tracking, and decision plans." @@ -47,9 +47,9 @@
- + - TinyStudio Agent Desk + The Tiny Studio Agent Desk
Cloudflare AI @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
- +

Build the pipeline system before you buy more ads.

The agents turn your offer, audience, proof, funnel, follow-up, CRM, weekly numbers, and market context into a Pipeline Brief, Implementation Checklist, and Weekly Fix Report. They draft the system; you still approve spend, publishing, and claims. diff --git a/public/agents.html b/public/agents.html index 2299847b..7adbbde4 100644 --- a/public/agents.html +++ b/public/agents.html @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ -The Desk — TinyStudio +The Desk — The Tiny Studio @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@

-

Every week the leak stays open is a week of traffic you already paid for, walking out.

+

Every week the page undersells you is a week of traffic you already paid for, walking out.

That is the only urgency we will ever sell you. Not a countdown, not a discount that expires — just the plain arithmetic that the visitors arriving today are leaving through the same gap they left through last month.

We make no claim about how much that costs you. We will show you where it happens; what it is worth is yours to judge.
diff --git a/public/audit.html b/public/audit.html index 076126e4..108ae05a 100644 --- a/public/audit.html +++ b/public/audit.html @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ -The leak audit — TinyStudio +The Website Appraisal — The Tiny Studio @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
- The leak audit + The appraisal

We read your page as a customer with intent reads it.

-

Four passes, by hand, on the surfaces that decide whether someone who arrived ready to buy stays that way. You get a short, plain document — named leaks in the order they cost you money, with the fix beside each one. No deck. No dashboard.

+

Four passes, by hand, on the surfaces that decide whether someone who arrived ready to buy stays that way. You get a short, plain document — each fault named, in order of what it costs you, with the fix beside each one. No deck. No dashboard.

- +

Thirty seconds to ask. Findings inside five working days. Yours to keep either way.

Six a month. When the sixth is taken, the intake closes until the next.
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@

We read your page as a customer with intent reads it.

answer none of the questions a buyer asks before committing.

We read eighty-nine of them — clinics, surgeons, dentists, spas, private members' clubs, property, supercar dealers, yacht brokers, private aviation, watch dealers, Savile Row tailors, interior designers and premium climate control — across London, New York, Miami, Dubai, Monaco, Beverly Hills and Fort Lauderdale. Fifty-three settled nothing a buyer needs settled before they will commit — not what happens next, not who it is for, not what it costs to be wrong. Fifty-seven showed no price either, though we count that differently: withholding a figure is often a deliberate act, and discretion is part of what some of these businesses sell. Answering nothing at all is nobody's strategy. That is the difference we look for — the gap between what a business chose and what simply happened to it. We re-read the set continuously, so this number is today's.

-
Method: automated read of the served homepage HTML, refreshed daily. Ninety-nine sites attempted across thirteen industries and eight geographies; eighty-nine readable, ten blocked by bot protection and excluded from every count. Inner pages are deliberately not counted — the finding is about the homepage, which is where the comparison happens. A homepage with no price may still have an excellent fee page one click deeper; that is itself one of the leaks.
+
Method: automated read of the served homepage HTML, refreshed daily. Ninety-nine sites attempted across thirteen industries and eight geographies; eighty-nine readable, ten blocked by bot protection and excluded from every count. Inner pages are deliberately not counted — the finding is about the homepage, which is where the comparison happens. A homepage with no price may still have an excellent fee page one click deeper; that is itself one of the faults.
@@ -61,9 +61,9 @@

The four passes

What lands in your inbox

-

A document, not a call. If you would rather never speak to us, the audit still works.

+

A document, not a call. If you would rather never speak to us, the appraisal still works.

-
Landing page — named leaksIn priority order
+
Landing page: named faultsIn priority order
Enquiry flow — friction countField by field
Paid creative — distinct conceptsConcepts, not hooks
Pre-purchase questionsAsked vs answered
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@

Why there are no logos on this site

- TinyStudio + The Tiny Studio The desk · Pricing No revenue, ranking or booking guarantees. Only the work.
diff --git a/public/brief-requested.html b/public/brief-requested.html index cf90fc8f..ec26770d 100644 --- a/public/brief-requested.html +++ b/public/brief-requested.html @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ -Request received — TinyStudio +Request received — The Tiny Studio @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ diff --git a/public/index.html b/public/index.html index b06601aa..651a88bf 100644 --- a/public/index.html +++ b/public/index.html @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@

How the work runs

Day 0

Everything on the table

Payment, access, the approval owner and the implementation owner, all recorded. The clock starts here and nowhere earlier.

Days 1–5

The read

-

The four passes, by hand. You get the each fault named, in order of what it costs you.

+

The four passes, by hand. You get each fault named, in order of what it costs you.

Days 6–14

The fix

The highest-leverage page rewritten or rebuilt, plus a dev-ready handoff if your team ships it.

Months 2–3

The loop

diff --git a/public/pricing.html b/public/pricing.html index 7ae7b6e3..18745e1b 100644 --- a/public/pricing.html +++ b/public/pricing.html @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ The appraisal The desk Pricing - Request an audit + Request the appraisal
diff --git a/public/specimen.html b/public/specimen.html index f0b23ff8..ec98154e 100644 --- a/public/specimen.html +++ b/public/specimen.html @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ The appraisal The desk Pricing - Request an audit + Request the appraisal